Assignment 22A- Elevator Pitch No.3


Elevator Pitch:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i4NmBMogE0c&feature=youtu.be


Reflection: I did not complete the last elevator pitch, however, I have pitched this idea to multiple students before and some of the feedback that they gave me was that I need to make what my idea is more clear. I think in this elevator pitch I did just that. I think I made it short and sweet, while still giving my customers a good idea of what my plan is.

What did I change?
I think I changed a lot of things in this elevator pitch, the lighting was better in my video and I think I had more personality in my voice, I think that my elevator pitch was short and sweet, but still very informative.

Comments

  1. ElizabethApril 4, 2020 at 11:33 AM

    Hey Taylor! I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. You sounded very natural, genuine, and conversational. I liked how you brought in examples that many UF students face. The examples were very relatable. I think UF needs more parking! One question is where would you find this valet parking lot? Thanks for sharing!

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  2. Celinda MillandApril 6, 2020 at 9:55 AM

    Hey Taylor!

    I think that your pitch was very relatable. I like how you started out with the hypothetical scenario too. I feel like it really helped me get a grasp of the situation and understand why this service is a necessity at UF, which is one of the major goals in a sales pitch like this. Your facial expressions also clearly demonstrated that you know and believe in what you're talking about too! Great work.

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  3. Carlton KemperApril 6, 2020 at 10:10 AM

    Also enjoyed your pitch Taylor. As Celinda said, very relatable. Chocked full of information and very substantive. Parking is a serious issue on campus, and I am glad someone is stepping up with a solution to create improvements. I wouldn’t change much within the actual pitch at all. Only changes I would encourage would be repetition to make it sound all more natural.

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